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Submitted: January 15
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O.Y.I.C. January part Twoby *MayVig

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~driftingsakura Jan 24, 2013 Student General Artist

I really love the way you do expressions! They're so clear

If you want to be really picky then I would say to change the angle/side you see the face because they're all the same side. But really I'm being really picky because there's nothin else to say then how brilliant these are!

*MayVig Jan 24, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Aww thanks so much! That's a good idea! *v* Thanks a lot! >w<

~AlexPetrovici Jan 22, 2013

I really like the expressions. The 2nd and the 4th ones are really nice.

Although, to improve the technique you should draw at a bigger resolution, at least to make fine lines, and I don't think that the textured brush helps. Also, shading improves a lot the quality.

As for the character, I consider that the legs are anatomically too long. Anyway, the character is really cute, I like it.

*MayVig Jan 22, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Thanks a lot for the critics! ^v^ For the legs, I've always made them very long!

I haven't done shadows for this one and that's right that improove the quality! ^^

Before, I was doing my drawing lines very cleen and fines, but I have enough to do a drawing not really interesting in 4hours instead of one in 2 hours and that I prefer! ^^
But thatnks a lot for this comments because it's help me to improove myself even if I don't do evrything!

~AlexPetrovici Feb 4, 2013

You're welcome ^^

*CaptnPenguin Jan 21, 2013

this has a great range of personality, and love how you rely don't just rely on the mouth for the expressions, you use the whole face and all its features to full extent for a good array of believable expressions, my favorite being the 3rd.

great highlights in the eyes and good touch with the blush too

*MayVig Jan 21, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you so much once again! I'm always happy to know what people like in my work and as that I'll can improove myself! Thank you! >w<

*CaptnPenguin Jan 22, 2013

you're welcome, and that's great

~arger Jan 21, 2013 Professional Digital Artist

oh wow~ she is just adorable!
I think you did a great job with those expressions, with the proportion of the eyes, and the anatomy!
She's just a fun character to draw, I'm totally sure and I love her~ x3
I don't have critiques for you, very very good!

*MayVig Jan 21, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Aww! Thanks so much! I'm so glad that she pleases you!
Thank you soo much! >w<

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